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Writing Prompt Sixty-Nine


Guidelines:
Length: 800 words or less
Deadline: None
Submission: 
  • Submit via email to beauxcooper@gmail.com
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Award: My favorite submissions will be featured on beauxcooper.com as well as all BC's social media outlets with all links connecting back to your blog/social media/website/etc.

Review: The Alchemaster's Apprentice

My rating: 5 of 5 stars

There's a difference between a cat and a crat, such a difference it will leave you wondering which one your feline friend is.

Echo is a crat down on his luck - forced to live on the streets in an unkind neighborhood after his adoring mistress passes away. He's at the end, starved and beaten with no hope of survival... that is until he makes a deal with the town's Alchemaster: thirty days of living in gastronomical luxury in exchange for his life. It's a deal he is desperately willing to make until he realizes maybe he wants to live after all.

Walter Moers has to be the only author I pre-order books from. As a bargain shopper, I very rarely buy a book at the $16-20 full price. With Moers, however, I make an exception and don't ever look back on the cost. I stumbled upon Moers in just such a way while rooting through the shelves of Half Priced Books (my favorite big-box book store) in Arizona in 2007. His book, Rumo and His Miraculous Adventures, was listed at $2.00 so I eagerly snatched it up and, after two days in reader's paradise, I returned and purchased any other book under his banner that I could find. But then, sadly, I ran out of novels to read. Though he has written many in German not so many were translated into English.

By complete happenstance, I saw on Amazon that a new arrival was soon coming - The Alchemaster's Apprentice. I pre-ordered it so fast I'm not sure my wallet knew what was happening.... and then I waited. It felt like forever, but the hardcover finally graced my door step and the reading commenced. This was all the way back in 2009 and I can honestly say I've read this book probably three or four more times since then.

That's the beauty of Moers' work. Their readability. The stories never get old. Even when you already know what is coming the beauty of his rule breaking with fonts, layout, and design (not to mention his artwork) is worthy of appreciation each time you flip the page. As a writer, I'm inspired... and envious.

Though these books fall under fantasy, it is directed toward an adult audience. For those of you who love young adult fiction for the imaginative characters and storylines, but whom are looking for something a little more grown up, I highly recommend any of Moers' books, The Alchemaster's Apprentice is no exception.

Writing Prompt Sixty-Eight


Guidelines:
Length: 800 words or less
Deadline: None
Submission: 
  • Submit via email to beauxcooper@gmail.com
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    • Include:
      • "Writing Prompt #____"
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      • Your story
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Award: My favorite submissions will be featured on beauxcooper.com as well as all BC's social media outlets with all links connecting back to your blog/social media/website/etc.

Daisies and Grenades


One drip of water is all it takes to drive a man insane, yet here I am, torturing my torturers by keeping my treasured wits. What they don't know, what they'll never know, is that past the drip of water is my skull and then my brain. This organ functions quietly as I fold my inner self deeper and deeper down into a canyon of my mind. 

The air is dry wrapped up in an arid atmosphere where the dripping of water acts as if the hand of Christ were blessing me. Their torturous stream is my salvation and with each drop my strength of self grows. They will not break the dam because just as the river floods the Grand Canyon, spring follows with wild flowers blooming.

Let them bathe me in their diseased waters and watch me emerge a blissful soldier of earth's good fortune. I have won the war they started fighting they need only to lay down their arms.

Writing Prompt Sixty-Seven


Guidelines:
Length: 800 words or less
Deadline: None
Submission: 
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      • Your story
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Dust Review: Cathy Geha

Reviewer: Cathy Geha
Rating: 5/5 stars
Date: March 10, 2016

Austen leaves Oregon, her husband of 4 years and all that she has known. She wants to get back in touch with herself and feels the only way to do so is to leave, work hard on a ranch and find out what is really important. Her husband is supportive though he is perhaps not sure what she is searching for. 

As the book unfolds there are letters sent home by Austen and a few sent to her from her husband, Jack. Austen meets new people, finds her healing skills valued and makes new friends. She also begins to find out what is really important for her to live a fulfilled life. 

Comments I made as I wrote: 
*Excellent
*Believable
*Emotions well written
*Deep
*Wow
*Insightful
*Truths abound
*Resonates
*Educational
*Descriptive

This well written, sometimes intense story was one I thoroughly enjoyed. I look forward to reading more books in the future by her. I thank her for the copy she gave to me to read and review.

See the review here!

Online Release Party!


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We're well underway with already one contest still open for participation!


Swing by to answer a few discussion questions about life, your dreams, and how you plan to get there.



There's a Q&A session that's ongoing - if you have any questions about me, the writing process, or anything else let me know!


Also - check out the first chapter of Dust for free!


And coming up later there will be another contest to win a Kindle Fire!

See you there!

The Art of Book Reviews: How To Structure One

The basics of a book review is very nearly a throwback to your elementary school days filled with book reports. Except no one is judging or grading you and you get to choose whatever you want to read and it DEFINITELY won't be Where the Red Fern Grows because the dogs are fine, OK?

Anyway - when writing a book review it's OK if you're only able to post a blurb that says "Loved it, buy it, you won't regret it" or "Hated it, was a waste of time" if that's all the time you have to offer...  But there's more to leaving a book review than your opinion. Future readers need to know if your opinion would match theirs based on the type of person you are and so on. This doesn't mean you have to offer your whole life's story to clue them in - just a little glimpse will do.


Here are a few main pieces to include in your book review when you're writing it:

Intro:
Give your initial reaction to the book - this will grab a future reader's attention and explain the mood of the story.

Synopsis:
Give your own little summary of what the book was about. This is a neat aspect of book reviews because everyone's summary about the same book will be a little different. You're going to focus on the pieces that struck you as the most important which will eventually show the diversity and depth of the book to future readers. When writing about the book please do not forget the next part...

Spoilers:
Like seriously. Don't do that. If you think it's going to be a spoiler, leave it out. Avoid them at all costs because nothing ruins a book faster than someone who blurts out the ending or twists to come in a review. Imagine someone telling you Darth Vader was Luke's father before you had a chance to watch the movie (and we're not counting that as a spoiler because, come on, you've had over 20 years to see it.) I'm pretty sure friendships end because of spoilers. SO. DON'T. DO. IT.

However, if there are twists coming it's OK to mention that there is a twist coming. It adds to the mystery and encourages future readers to pick up the book.

Background Information:
Who are you? Do you read this genre all the time or did you happen to stumble across the book? Are you familiar with the author's other work? How did you end up with the book? How long did it take you to read? How does your profession or the activities you're involved in relate to the book, if at all? These types of questions give your review credibility. If you were looking to buy a romance novel based on the reviews would you go with the person who doesn't ever read romance novels or the person who reads them all the time? Exactly.

If you're reading a book that was authored by a friend be careful about saying that you read it because the author was your friend. Some websites like Amazon are really cracking down on reviews and will delete reviews from people who are closely linked because of the risk of bias.

What you liked:
This is the part that seems like a no-brainer, but it's super important. Give it substance, though, by telling us what you liked about it; how it touched, inspired, or entertained you; why you connected with it. This sort of depth is great information for future readers who may relate to you on a personal level and brings the content of the book to life.

What you didn't like (if applicable):
You don't have to love every part of every book you read, but if you're going to leave a scathing review or even a so-so review, please let people know why you didn't like what you read. Give future readers examples of what you didn't like and even dare to offer ways the book could be improved.

When reading indie-books (books published by independently owned publishers rather than the big names like Penguin and Random House) be prepared to see a typo or two and then get over it. If it's a lot of typos, then say something. There's perfection and then there's neglect.

If you didn't like the book, take an "it's not you, it's me" approach to how you write about it. Your opinion isn't the same for everyone so be sure to talk about what made it unreadable rather than just simply stating you didn't like it. More on this in a future The Art of Book Reviews post.


Recommendation:

You've likely already given your star rating of the book, but there's more to it than that. Be sure to include who you would recommend the book to. You're not going to recommend a sci-fi novel to a reader who only reads historical fiction.... so make sure your recommendations make sense. Is it ideal for people who love adventure? Or adults with wild imaginations? If you liked the book then it's a small leap to say that people like you will also like it.


Bonus Tips:


  • Try to include some sentences that can be used as "sound bites" for the authors to advertise with. For example, if you loved the book because of the pacing and action say something like "Take a deep breath and hold on tight, Book will whisk you away to...." It's ok to over exaggerate your feelings here. Since we can't read your body language or see the expressions in your face your words need to do the telling for you.

  • Most review sites will ask you to rate it out of five stars and even tell you what they think each star means. Pay attention to their definitions of stars so that you make an accurate rating choice. If no definitions are given, create your own.

  • Something is better than nothing and we writers will take what we can get, so thank you for your time and energy (no matter the amount) put into sharing your thoughts on our work. We really do appreciate it and your words can make all the difference in our success!

What was the last book review you left?

- Summer Dreaming -


Sweat drips down my side.
You'll find salvation in me,
Like a desert well.

- Lasting Love -


Kiss me my darling
Hard, quick - like when we were kids.
Then we'll play some more.

- Bath Time -


Dirty little paws,
Soap bubbled puppy kisses,
Murky water drains.

Rail


Holy rays of the peak afternoon sun blinded me as I left the final step of the train platform. It had been an abominable trip where my private box was shared with another woman who had little respect for the beauty of silence and contemplation and instead preferred to lambaste me with her familial history and why on earth she had ever decided to take the rail to the very same city I was destined. This would not do.

Rather than swing arm in arm with the chipper train sprite I held on one stop longer and enjoyed those forty minutes of crushing silence as if I were a fish who had reclaimed her watery home after seconds too long without it. The stop belonged to a hamlet and the hamlet an outcropping of a nearby village each connected to the other, and only the other, by the church standing in the middle.

The spire cast a shadow toward me, pointing out my falsehood. The wooden planks of this stop and station house saw only the footsteps of deep rooted family and long past soldiers. Not a person among the three other passengers knew my face as likewise their embrace ready sister or mother or wife eyed me carefully unable to place me, but duly concerned to try.

"Are you lost, dear?" An elderly woman in a satin mauve blouse and brown wool pinafore pressed her hand around my elbow leading me toward the ticket booth.

"Oh, no. I'm sorry. I already have a pass." I leaned backward to halt our forward motion. She stared at me, searching my face for any hint of the family I belonged to. She would find no resemblance to any she knew. "I just needed a little escape is all. I'll wait here for the next train up the line."

"You'll be waiting until morning on that bench there if you wish. Might be fine in the summer heat, but the morning dew will chill yoo. Better come with me." Her hand moved from my elbow to my back and without force she guided me down a lane walled in by overgrown English gardens and broken stones.

Though I hesitated in the beginning, I gave up my reins which held on to the burdens of time, places to be, the people to see to the little old woman who led me. "I'll find a hotel for the night."

"You'll get the pub."

"Right. The pub then."

"It's full to the rafters below, but we'll find you some place for the night upstairs. George is in. You'll like him. Snores a bit and takes up most the bed, but he's good company."

"Is he at least handsome?" The lane of budding posies and bells gave way to a paved roundabout which opened to the heart of the hamlet where the public house stood centered between a floral and stationary shop. Gardens surrounded the court with whitewashed, stone faced cottages sandwiched between hollyhocks and evergreen shrubs. The church spire stretched upward. Like the needle of a compass, it dragged villagers from their cubbyhole homes into the grass filled square and on north.

"Goodness, me! No. The cheek. George 's the landlord's shepherd. He'll warm your feet at night if you want him." She laughed wholly at what must have been the thought of a shepherd dog in man's clothing and then moved forward to cross the courtyard.

The black worm trailed wood  of the pub door held back roars of male voices, the chirps of women calling. The stoic little hamlet's populous confined within living to the beat of music and drums of beer.

These are the last moments that linger in my mind before everything fades away into a mist over the tepid sea of my memory. I remember her face, the wrinkles and soft rouge. Her laugh comes back like the crystal clear thundering of the church bells above me. But how I came to be in this room with ankles cuffed to the iron bed rail there is nothing. Not even a hint to my purpose. Only sermon below me and bells above. And to the sounds of a whimpering dog who wants in through the door, but cannot reach the latch, I wait.

Writing Prompt Sixty-Six


Guidelines:
Length: 800 words or less
Deadline: None
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  • Copy your story into the Message box:
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Award: My favorite submissions will be featured on beauxcooper.com as well as all BC's social media outlets with all links connecting back to your blog/social media/website/etc.

Writing Prompt Sixty-Five


Guidelines:
Length: 800 words or less
Deadline: None
Submission: 
  • Submit via email to beauxcooper@gmail.com
  • Copy your story into the Message box:
    • Include:
      • "Writing Prompt #____"
      • Your return contact information marked with a "(P)" for private if applicable
      • Public contact information you would like me to reference if your piece should be selected for feature.
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        • Optional: A photo of you
      • Your story
        • Please copy and paste into the body of the message, however, if you have a special format design for your story (such as moments of centered or right alignment, size, etc.) attachments are accepted.
Award: My favorite submissions will be featured on beauxcooper.com as well as all BC's social media outlets with all links connecting back to your blog/social media/website/etc.

The Art of Book Reviews: Why You Should Write Them

You've had a great experience at the grocery store with a clerk who's helped you locate the African Jasmine needed for your latest Pinterest recipe and they were patient, outgoing, and respectful. They went above and beyond to help you so, in turn, you've decided to write a little blurb on a comment card to their manager about how wonderful they are. It just feels right after all they did for you.

Or maybe you've just sat down in a restaurant and the seats are dirty, there's jelly on the window, and the floor is covered in trash. Then the waiter comes up and his attitude matches the floor. It's a terrible dining experience and whether you decided to leave without your meal or you suffered through until the end, you've already formulated an opinion about the restaurant and those who work there. The receipt says "take this survey for a chance to win..." and you leap at the opportunity. Oh boy, do you have something to say! Or you hop online and leave a scathing description of your experience to warn others away from the same fate. 

Just like any service you receive or purchase you've made, be it the cable guy, a computer, or furniture, you're likely to write a review of your experience whether it was a positive or negative one, especially since they make it so easy to do these days. Typically, we see the negative come out more often because we feel the need to enact justice for our disappointment. Rarely do we take the time to write up a review of someone's good work until it was so exceptional that we feel it is our duty to let others know.

But have you written a review for a book you've read?

Just like customer service and business, book reviews can make all the difference in the world to the success of that book. I know I've said it before, but:


Before I was published I had no idea how important book reviews were or the impact they had on the author's success. I was oblivious. No one had told me! I don't usually read best sellers... I avoid them actually, because I'm just hipster enough to want to avoid the mainstream (I'm also a total hypocrite about it, so don't judge me,) so star ratings didn't really matter to me. I'm less motivated by the book's selling status and more interested in the cover art or the enthusiasm of my friend who's offered me their copy. So I was completely ignorant of this whole piece to the book consumer puzzle.

Since entering the publishing world and becoming an author myself, I see now how deadly important these reviews can be - especially in the indie scene. Reviews can make or break a book in that not enough of them shows that the book isn't selling, too many five stars and the reviews are suddenly unreliable. No. Authors need a mix of ratings with a mix of reactions so that new readers can see how the book reads across the board. The reviews that explain why the book was a load of junk are much more useful to future readers than reviews that just say it's trash, just as those reviews which explain why a reader loved it are more helpful as well.

As a way to repent for my neglectful bookworm ways I've shared my reviews of the books I love and didn't love so much. I've posted to Amazon, Goodreads, my social media suite, and this site. I'm trying to make up for lost time and have many years to catch up on.

In the series, The Art of Book Reviews, that is to follow this post I hope to encourage other readers to do the same. Support your favorite author by telling the world how you feel about their work. Read something lately that you couldn't even get through? Rescue a future reader and let them know before it's too late!

What was the last book you left a review for? Was it positive or negative?
Tell me in the comments - hyperlinks for books are ok! 
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